diff --git a/docs/dev/basics.rst b/docs/dev/basics.rst index 27ba23d3..84a74987 100644 --- a/docs/dev/basics.rst +++ b/docs/dev/basics.rst @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ commits, making `git reflog` the only way to recover them! make refresh-patches -In order to refresh patches when updating feeds or the OpenWrt base, `make refresh-patches` applies and updates all of their patches without installing feed packages to the OpenWrt buildsystem. +In order to refresh patches when updating feeds or the OpenWrt base, `make refresh-patches` applies and updates all of their patches without installing feed packages to the OpenWrt build system. This command speeds up the maintenance of updating OpenWrt and feeds. @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ apply: - use tabs instead of spaces - trailing whitespaces must be eliminated - files need to end with a final newline -- newlines need to have unix line endings (lf) +- newlines need to have Unix line endings (lf) To that end we provide a ``.editorconfig`` configuration, which is supported by most of the editors out there. diff --git a/docs/dev/debugging.rst b/docs/dev/debugging.rst index ca1cd041..626cf28e 100644 --- a/docs/dev/debugging.rst +++ b/docs/dev/debugging.rst @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Some more information on how to use this tool can be found at Obtaining Stacktraces ..................... -On many targets stacktraces can be read from the following +On many targets stack traces can be read from the following location after reboot: :: /sys/kernel/debug/crashlog diff --git a/docs/features/monitoring.rst b/docs/features/monitoring.rst index 2879bf73..d88baaf5 100644 --- a/docs/features/monitoring.rst +++ b/docs/features/monitoring.rst @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ installed. Please note that at least one alfred daemon is required to run as .. _alfred-json: https://github.com/ffnord/alfred-json -The following datatypes are used: +The following data types are used: * `nodeinfo`: 158 * `statistics`: 159 diff --git a/docs/features/vpn.rst b/docs/features/vpn.rst index a65750c1..6db2ecc6 100644 --- a/docs/features/vpn.rst +++ b/docs/features/vpn.rst @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ should always appear before ``null`` in the configuration when both are enabled. fastd v22 or newer is needed for the ``null@l2tp`` method. It is often not necessary to enable L2TP offloading on supernodes for -performance reasons. Nodes using offloading can communicate with supornodes that +performance reasons. Nodes using offloading can communicate with supernodes that don't use offloading as long as both use the ``null@l2tp`` method. @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ However, the important changes to the fastd config on your Supernode are: Note that in ``multitap`` mode, which is required when using L2TP offloading, fastd will create one interface per peer on the supernode's. This allows offloading the L2TP forwarding into the kernel space. But this also means added -copmlexity with regards to handling those interfaces. +complexity with regards to handling those interfaces. There are two main options on how you can handle this: diff --git a/docs/releases/v2020.1.rst b/docs/releases/v2020.1.rst index bebd07c4..fe62c240 100644 --- a/docs/releases/v2020.1.rst +++ b/docs/releases/v2020.1.rst @@ -127,10 +127,10 @@ Renamed targets Status Page ~~~~~~~~~~~ -- Gateway nexthop information has been added to the statuspage when batman-adv +- Gateway nexthop information has been added to the status page when batman-adv is used. This includes its MAC address and prettyname as well as the interface name towards the selected gateway. -- The site name has been added to the statuspage. If the node is in a multidomain +- The site name has been added to the status page. If the node is in a multidomain setup it will also show the domain name. DECT button to enter config mode diff --git a/docs/releases/v2021.1.1.rst b/docs/releases/v2021.1.1.rst index 573babf5..8d5e626b 100644 --- a/docs/releases/v2021.1.1.rst +++ b/docs/releases/v2021.1.1.rst @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ Bugfixes - The Tunneldigger VPN provider was not registered with the Gluon VPN backend, resulting in broken Tunneldigger configurations. -- Disabling Radio interfaces in v2021.1 could lead to nullpointer dereferences in the respondd airtime module, as the survey returns no data in this case. +- Disabling Radio interfaces in v2021.1 could lead to null pointer dereferences in the respondd airtime module, as the survey returns no data in this case. Known issues